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Candy Shop

By: Bianca M.
Burundi, Age 9

My first time I went to the candy shop in United State my first time. I was so excited .It tasted gum and other candies too. It smelled chocolate, gum, vanilla, lollypop, pushups and nice music of Hannah Montana and High School Musical2. I saw many candies was buying I stepped on the choclate and they told me donít werried they will clean it up.



WE bought many Candys and strawberry with chocolate we left my dog out side and my dog started to eat chocolates and gums at the time we stopped him there where five things left .My mother paid it all she was very angry.It was my dog and I best day.