Albert Einstein By: Shaun B. Ohio, Age 12 Albert Einstein was a genius. He was thought to be retarded, but he got better at school as he grew up. He moved to Italy when he was 14 or 15 years old. This book will tell you about how he got to be a genius. Albert Einstein was a professor. He taught students Physics. There were four people in the Einstein family--Mr. and Mrs. Einstein, Albert and his three year old sister, Maja. The Einsteins were a Jewish family who lived in Munich, Germany. Albert Einstein had a job working for the Swiss government in Bern. He was a patent examiner. Albert Einstein was a professor and taught at the University of Zurich. In 1939, Einstein wrote a letter to president Roosevelt. In that letter he warned that the Germans were working on an atom bomb. In 1945, when the first atom bomb was dropped on Japan, it proved that EinsteinÆs idea was right. When Einstein came to the United States, a great crowd gathered at the harbor to welcome him. They knew him because he was a genius. Dr.Einstein discovered the explanation of what scientists called the photoelectric effect in 1905. Albert Einstein proved himself to be a great professor that taught physics at the University of Zurich.

Author's comments

Hello,
Thank you for the biography of Elbert Einstein. You did a good job of showing that he was a remarkable man.

I have a suggestion that might help improve the submission. Organize of your facts.

You start with Einstein's early life then you skip to his sceintific discoveries, then back to his teaching. Look at the information and decide what should come first, second, third...etc. Once you put your facts in the order in which they happened, I think you will see your work improve somewhat.
Best,
Pat McKissack