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Allie's big concert

By: Abigail S.
Maryland, Age 8

Allie was a girl of music she sang where ever she went. one day Palein who was a musician herd her and gave her a chance to have a concert. when she got home could you believe what she did? she bragged on and on again to her friends family and all others. one day Palein heard her bragging and canceled her concert. Allie was sad and sorry for the people she bragged to. she apologized and didn't feel sad afterwards. she was happy to do the right thing. Palein heard and was proud. he let her do the concert.her song was about doing the right thing. THE END!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!