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''A Fractured Tale Snow Pink and the Sponges

By: Alexzandre'a R.
Virginia, Age 13


One freezing winter night in a mansion a little baby was born. Her parents named her Snow Pink but everybody called her Pink. As the years passed Pink grew up to be a very educated woman. Her friends and family won her heart over the years. The problem was she had no friends, because she had a lot of things every body didnĂt have, like money, and a lot of clothes and so on.
After PinkĂs dad died she lived in the mansion with her stepmother. The problem was her stepmother was jealous of PinkĂs beauty, and she was heartless. So she dressed her in torn, raged and dirty clothes and made her work as a maid, but that still didnĂt stop Pink from smiling.
The motherĂs prize possession was her mirror. Every day she would spend hours standing in front of her mirror. She would also ask Pink who is the cutest of them all and if she didnĂt say you are she would get punished. After she did her mothers little mirror she worked for long hours in and outside the house. She always did her chores with a loving heart singing.
One day when she went to fetch water for her stepmother she met this man at the well. He fell in love with her then Pink got scared and ran for safety into the house.
The next day her stepmother thought that Pink was not doing her chores. So she called for her huntsman, and she told him to take Pink far into the woods and kill her then bring back proof that he did as he was told. Now the huntsman was so scared of the evil stepmother so he did as he was told.
The next evening the huntsman took Pink far into the woods as he was told. He studied Pink as she stopped to place a rabbit back into his hole. Right then the man realized that he could not harm this kindhearted woman right then he fell to his knees and begged for his forgiveness.
The man said ˘Pink you are not safe your stepmother has sent me to kill you. Please run save yourself run into the woods and never return. Run far away.÷ She got scared and ran till her side was hurting, and she could not run anymore. Then she later fell and cried her self to sleep.
To prove to the stepmother he placed an animalĂs heart in a little box, and gave it to her. When she saw it her eyes glowed with happiness. When Pink woke up the next morning she was surrounded my many animals. Then she began to sing and she no longer felt lonely.
Pink then asked them do you know of a place where I can stay .The next thing she knows the bird says well I know of one little cottage in the woods that is good for shelter. Pink said can you take me there. Then the animals began tugging on her jacket. Then they just stopped. She saw a little house with smoke coming from the chimney.
When she entered she sees nobody but the place is very junky so she and her new friends cleaned it up. After she was done she went up stair and she found three water beds and on the front of them were are names carved in them ones said Jasmine the other said Tiffany and the last one said Quiana.
The beds were all different sizes JasmineĂs were the shortest then TiffanyĂs and the last one was the longest. So she put them all together and fell asleep.
Mean wile three sponges were walking from work. Singing ˘Who lives in a pineapple under the sea sponge bob square pants÷. They then noticed some thing about their house as soon as they walked in the house. They noticed that it was clean. So they got scared and ran up stairs into their room. When they noticed her in the bed and woke her up. From that point on they were good friends. Every day before the Thee little sponges left the house Pink handed them their lunch and gave them a hug and they were on their way to work.
While Pink was living a great life her evil stepmother found out that Pink was still alive the evil stepmother had hired someone else to kill her. What she did was dipped a peach into some cleaners and let is dry into the peach so the peach became deadly.
She handed the peach to a little girl to give her so that when she bit it she would die so she thought. Then she sent her off to the little house that Pink was alone.
Mean wile Pink was outside singing to the animals when the little girl skipped up and gave her the peach. After the little girl left Pink went into the house, and put the peach into the refrigerator. Later on when Pink got hungry pulled out the peach took a bite then suddenly she fell to the ground. When the animals saw her fall they ran as fast as their legs to go and ran to the three sponges jobs got them to follow them and when they saw Pink on the floor and ran into the house. The next thing they knew the boy that she had meet at the well that day at the mansion. The next thing the man was kissing her and slowly she began to move. Time goes by and she is ok. Now the three sponges, Pink, and the boy from the well all lived together, and the stepmother bothered them ever again and they lived happily ever after.

One freezing winter night in a mansion a little baby was born. Her parents named her Snow Pink but everybody called her Pink. As the years passed Pink grew up to be a very educated woman. Her friends and family won her heart over the years. The problem was she had no friends, because she had a lot of things every body didnĂt have, like money, and a lot of clothes and so on.
After PinkĂs dad died she lived in the mansion with her stepmother. The problem was her stepmother was jealous of PinkĂs beauty, and she was heartless. So she dressed her in torn, raged and dirty clothes and made her work as a maid, but that still didnĂt stop Pink from smiling.
The motherĂs prize possession was her mirror. Every day she would spend hours standing in front of her mirror. She would also ask Pink who is the cutest of them all and if she didnĂt say you are she would get punished. After she did her mothers little mirror she worked for long hours in and outside the house. She always did her chores with a loving heart singing.
One day when she went to fetch water for her stepmother she met this man at the well. He fell in love with her then Pink got scared and ran for safety into the house.
The next day her stepmother thought that Pink was not doing her chores. So she called for her huntsman, and she told him to take Pink far into the woods and kill her then bring back proof that he did as he was told. Now the huntsman was so scared of the evil stepmother so he did as he was told.
The next evening the huntsman took Pink far into the woods as he was told. He studied Pink as she stopped to place a rabbit back into his hole. Right then the man realized that he could not harm this kindhearted woman right then he fell to his knees and begged for his forgiveness.
The man said ˘Pink you are not safe your stepmother has sent me to kill you. Please run save yourself run into the woods and never return. Run far away.÷ She got scared and ran till her side was hurting, and she could not run anymore. Then she later fell and cried her self to sleep.
To prove to the stepmother he placed an animalĂs heart in a little box, and gave it to her. When she saw it her eyes glowed with happiness. When Pink woke up the next morning she was surrounded my many animals. Then she began to sing and she no longer felt lonely.
Pink then asked them do you know of a place where I can stay .The next thing she knows the bird says well I know of one little cottage in the woods that is good for shelter. Pink said can you take me there. Then the animals began tugging on her jacket. Then they just stopped. She saw a little house with smoke coming from the chimney.
When she entered she sees nobody but the place is very junky so she and her new friends cleaned it up. After she was done she went up stair and she found three water beds and on the front of them were are names carved in them ones said Jasmine the other said Tiffany and the last one said Quiana.
The beds were all different sizes JasmineĂs were the shortest then TiffanyĂs and the last one was the longest. So she put them all together and fell asleep.
Mean wile three sponges were walking from work. Singing ˘Who lives in a pineapple under the sea sponge bob square pants÷. They then noticed some thing about their house as soon as they walked in the house. They noticed that it was clean. So they got scared and ran up stairs into their room. When they noticed her in the bed and woke her up. From that point on they were good friends. Every day before the Thee little sponges left the house Pink handed them their lunch and gave them a hug and they were on their way to work.
While Pink was living a great life her evil stepmother found out that Pink was still alive the evil stepmother had hired someone else to kill her. What she did was dipped a peach into some cleaners and let is dry into the peach so the peach became deadly.
She handed the peach to a little girl to give her so that when she bit it she would die so she thought. Then she sent her off to the little house that Pink was alone.
Mean wile Pink was outside singing to the animals when the little girl skipped up and gave her the peach. After the little girl left Pink went into the house, and put the peach into the refrigerator. Later on when Pink got hungry pulled out the peach took a bite then suddenly she fell to the ground. When the animals saw her fall they ran as fast as their legs to go and ran to the three sponges jobs got them to follow them and when they saw Pink on the floor and ran into the house. The next thing they knew the boy that she had meet at the well that day at the mansion. The next thing the man was kissing her and slowly she began to move. Time goes by and she is ok. Now the three sponges, Pink, and the boy from the well all lived together, and the stepmother bothered them ever again and they lived happily ever after.

One freezing winter night in a mansion a little baby was born. Her parents named her Snow Pink but everybody called her Pink. As the years passed Pink grew up to be a very educated woman. Her friends and family won her heart over the years. The problem was she had no friends, because she had a lot of things every body didnĂt have, like money, and a lot of clothes and so on.
After PinkĂs dad died she lived in the mansion with her stepmother. The problem was her stepmother was jealous of PinkĂs beauty, and she was heartless. So she dressed her in torn, raged and dirty clothes and made her work as a maid, but that still didnĂt stop Pink from smiling.
The motherĂs prize possession was her mirror. Every day she would spend hours standing in front of her mirror. She would also ask Pink who is the cutest of them all and if she didnĂt say you are she would get punished. After she did her mothers little mirror she worked for long hours in and outside the house. She always did her chores with a loving heart singing.
One day when she went to fetch water for her stepmother she met this man at the well. He fell in love with her then Pink got scared and ran for safety into the house.
The next day her stepmother thought that Pink was not doing her chores. So she called for her huntsman, and she told him to take Pink far into the woods and kill her then bring back proof that he did as he was told. Now the huntsman was so scared of the evil stepmother so he did as he was told.
The next evening the huntsman took Pink far into the woods as he was told. He studied Pink as she stopped to place a rabbit back into his hole. Right then the man realized that he could not harm this kindhearted woman right then he fell to his knees and begged for his forgiveness.
The man said ˘Pink you are not safe your stepmother has sent me to kill you. Please run save yourself run into the woods and never return. Run far away.÷ She got scared and ran till her side was hurting, and she could not run anymore. Then she later fell and cried her self to sleep.
To prove to the stepmother he placed an animalĂs heart in a little box, and gave it to her. When she saw it her eyes glowed with happiness. When Pink woke up the next morning she was surrounded my many animals. Then she began to sing and she no longer felt lonely.
Pink then asked them do you know of a place where I can stay .The next thing she knows the bird says well I know of one little cottage in the woods that is good for shelter. Pink said can you take me there. Then the animals began tugging on her jacket. Then they just stopped. She saw a little house with smoke coming from the chimney.
When she entered she sees nobody but the place is very junky so she and her new friends cleaned it up. After she was done she went up stair and she found three water beds and on the front of them were are names carved in them ones said Jasmine the other said Tiffany and the last one said Quiana.
The beds were all different sizes JasmineĂs were the shortest then TiffanyĂs and the last one was the longest. So she put them all together and fell asleep.
Mean wile three sponges were walking from work. Singing ˘Who lives in a pineapple under the sea sponge bob square pants÷. They then noticed some thing about their house as soon as they walked in the house. They noticed that it was clean. So they got scared and ran up stairs into their room. When they noticed her in the bed and woke her up. From that point on they were good friends. Every day before the Thee little sponges left the house Pink handed them their lunch and gave them a hug and they were on their way to work.
While Pink was living a great life her evil stepmother found out that Pink was still alive the evil stepmother had hired someone else to kill her. What she did was dipped a peach into some cleaners and let is dry into the peach so the peach became deadly.
She handed the peach to a little girl to give her so that when she bit it she would die so she thought. Then she sent her off to the little house that Pink was alone.
Mean wile Pink was outside singing to the animals when the little girl skipped up and gave her the peach. After the little girl left Pink went into the house, and put the peach into the refrigerator. Later on when Pink got hungry pulled out the peach took a bite then suddenly she fell to the ground. When the animals saw her fall they ran as fast as their legs to go and ran to the three sponges jobs got them to follow them and when they saw Pink on the floor and ran into the house. The next thing they knew the boy that she had meet at the well that day at the mansion. The next thing the man was kissing her and slowly she began to move. Time goes by and she is ok. Now the three sponges, Pink, and the boy from the well all lived together, and the stepmother bothered them ever again and they lived happily ever after.

One freezing winter night in a mansion a little baby was born. Her parents named her Snow Pink but everybody called her Pink. As the years passed Pink grew up to be a very educated woman. Her friends and family won her heart over the years. The problem was she had no friends, because she had a lot of things every body didnĂt have, like money, and a lot of clothes and so on.
After PinkĂs dad died she lived in the mansion with her stepmother. The problem was her stepmother was jealous of PinkĂs beauty, and she was heartless. So she dressed her in torn, raged and dirty clothes and made her work as a maid, but that still didnĂt stop Pink from smiling.
The motherĂs prize possession was her mirror. Every day she would spend hours standing in front of her mirror. She would also ask Pink who is the cutest of them all and if she didnĂt say you are she would get punished. After she did her mothers little mirror she worked for long hours in and outside the house. She always did her chores with a loving heart singing.
One day when she went to fetch water for her stepmother she met this man at the well. He fell in love with her then Pink got scared and ran for safety into the house.
The next day her stepmother thought that Pink was not doing her chores. So she called for her huntsman, and she told him to take Pink far into the woods and kill her then bring back proof that he did as he was told. Now the huntsman was so scared of the evil stepmother so he did as he was told.
The next evening the huntsman took Pink far into the woods as he was told. He studied Pink as she stopped to place a rabbit back into his hole. Right then the man realized that he could not harm this kindhearted woman right then he fell to his knees and begged for his forgiveness.
The man said ˘Pink you are not safe your stepmother has sent me to kill you. Please run save yourself run into the woods and never return. Run far away.÷ She got scared and ran till her side was hurting, and she could not run anymore. Then she later fell and cried her self to sleep.
To prove to the stepmother he placed an animalĂs heart in a little box, and gave it to her. When she saw it her eyes glowed with happiness. When Pink woke up the next morning she was surrounded my many animals. Then she began to sing and she no longer felt lonely.
Pink then asked them do you know of a place where I can stay .The next thing she knows the bird says well I know of one little cottage in the woods that is good for shelter. Pink said can you take me there. Then the animals began tugging on her jacket. Then they just stopped. She saw a little house with smoke coming from the chimney.
When she entered she sees nobody but the place is very junky so she and her new friends cleaned it up. After she was done she went up stair and she found three water beds and on the front of them were are names carved in them ones said Jasmine the other said Tiffany and the last one said Quiana.
The beds were all different sizes JasmineĂs were the shortest then TiffanyĂs and the last one was the longest. So she put them all together and fell asleep.
Mean wile three sponges were walking from work. Singing ˘Who lives in a pineapple under the sea sponge bob square pants÷. They then noticed some thing about their house as soon as they walked in the house. They noticed that it was clean. So they got scared and ran up stairs into their room. When they noticed her in the bed and woke her up. From that point on they were good friends. Every day before the Thee little sponges left the house Pink handed them their lunch and gave them a hug and they were on their way to work.
While Pink was living a great life her evil stepmother found out that Pink was still alive the evil stepmother had hired someone else to kill her. What she did was dipped a peach into some cleaners and let is dry into the peach so the peach became deadly.
She handed the peach to a little girl to give her so that when she bit it she would die so she thought. Then she sent her off to the little house that Pink was alone.
Mean wile Pink was outside singing to the animals when the little girl skipped up and gave her the peach. After the little girl left Pink went into the house, and put the peach into the refrigerator. Later on when Pink got hungry pulled out the peach took a bite then suddenly she fell to the ground. When the animals saw her fall they ran as fast as their legs to go and ran to the three sponges jobs got them to follow them and when they saw Pink on the floor and ran into the house. The next thing they knew the boy that she had meet at the well that day at the mansion. The next thing the man was kissing her and slowly she began to move. Time goes by and she is ok. Now the three sponges, Pink, and the boy from the well all lived together, and the stepmother bothered them ever again and they lived happily ever after.