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Baby Locks & Thre Three Mean Beans

By: Marco V.
Australia, Age 8

ONCE NOT SO LONG AGO THERE WAS A LITTLE BABY CALLED BABY LOCKS. ONE DAY SHE CALLED TO HER MUM, “MUM I’M GOING OUT IN THE FOREST”. SO SHE SET OFF INTO THE FOREST. WHEN SHE WAS IN THE FOREST SHE SAW A GROSS OLD HOUSE WITH 3 MEAN BEANS LIVING IN THE HOUSE.

ONE DAY THE 3 MEAN BEANS WERE EATING THEIR TOAST it was
So they went for a bike ride. Then a baby came inTO the house. It was Babylocks. She yelled, “ c SO SHE ATE ALL THE TOAST! EVEN BIG DADDYS! THEN SHE WENT ON THE COMPUTER AND SHE WENT ON FACEBOOK. WAIT, SHE’S A BABY WHY IS SHE PLAYING ON FACEBOOK? WHEN SHE GOT OFF SHE TRIPPED ON THE WIRES AND SHE YELLED, “OOPS I DIDN’T DO IT!”AND SHE STARTED TO CRY.

WHEN SHE STOPPED CRYING she was so bored. She said, “I want to go out side. How about you guys? she said to the toys. “Hello answer THEY didn’t. So she just went out side. She saw a BIG TRAMPOLINE ON THE GRASS. SHE CRAWLED AS FAST AS SHE COULD AND SHE BROEK IT. SHE SAID, “OOPS I DIDN’T DO IT” AND THEN SHE FELL ASLEEP.ZZZZZ….

MEANWHILE THE 3 MEAN BEANS CAME HOME TO EAT THEIR TOAST BUT ALL THEY SAW WAS……..




“WHO’S BEEN EATING OUR TOAST?” THEY YELLED. NO ONE ANSWERED. SO THEY JUST WENT ON THEIR CONPUTER BUT IT WOULD NOT TURN ON.” WHO’S BEEN PLAYING ON MY FACEBOOK AND WHO BROKE IT? NO ONE ANSWERED. SO THEY JUST WENT OUT SIDE ON THE TRAMPOLINE BUT…


“WHO ARE YOU?” THEY ASKED. “ I’M, I’M,BABY LOCKS”. “I’M GOING TO KILL YOU”, SCREAMED BIG DADDY. BABY LOCKS SAID “I’M OUT!” AND SHE CRAWLED AS FAST AS SHE COULD. SHE GRABBED A MATCH AND SOME BOMBS FROM THE HOUSE AND SHE BLEW IT UP!!!!!!!

“AAARGH”, YELLED THE 3 MEAN BEANS AS THEY WERE SENT INTO THE SKY. BABYLOCKS RAN BACK HOME AND SAID TO HER MUM. “ MUM IT WAS SO COOL”. THE MUM WHISPERED, “SHHHHH GO TO SLEPP LOCKSY”. “OK MUM”, SHE SAID AND SHE LIVED HAPPILY EVER AFTER.

THE END.