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Avalice

By: Stacyy E.
Louisiana, Age 15

My mother was famous in the town I live in. So when she died, everyone was sad. My father, a rich man, found a new mistress rather quickly. I favored my mother in many ways, blonde hair, blue eyes, pale skin, and straight teeth. When my father married Aqua, she got jealous of me quickly. Her twin daughters, Lacey and Tracey, did also.
Aqua, Lacey, and Tracey all favored each other. They had stringy black hair, crooked smiles, empty brown eyes, and moles. That's not necessarily common in Paris. We're the