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A Day In The Mall

By: Raven M.
Texas, Age 12

One day at the mall I saw a very strang and odd man. He had a oval head with big huge eyes. This man also had hair like a wooly booger. After I saw him I started to star and when I did all I could thinck of was oh my gosh he's got an afroe on his head, but every time I looked for a few seconds. Case if I looked for a long time I new I would get in trobel sooner or later so. Thats why I only looked a little bit at a time because if I got coat I would not just get in trouble by him,I would also get in trouble by my mom to, so then I stoped looking and went home to have a nice snack with my sweet momma.