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A Avalanche That Was Magical

By: Ava B.
California, Age 11

Once upon a time a girl named hannah was sking. She was up in the mountain going from side to side but than she fell. She saw the slope that loked so cool but was for ages 12 and up and she was only 11. The next day hannah wentr on the slope. THE SNOW TOLD her not to. When she wason the slope an avalanche happened and broke her arm. She never went on that slope until she was 12 then she sucedded.