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RAINSTORM

By: BRIAN B.
Georgia, Age 13

ONCE UPON A TIME I HAD GOT LOST IN THE RAINFOREST MARCH 5,2010 IT WAS THE AFTERNOON AND IT WAS DRILZALING AND THERE WAS HAIL COMING DOWN TO AND THE HAIL FLET LIKE BIG BALLS OF ICE AND ALL OF A SUDDENLY THE RAIN WATER UP TO MY KNEES AND THE WATER WAS VERY COLD THEN I FLET SNAKES UNDER THE WATER TRYING TO BITE MY FEET AND THEN THE WATER WAS UP TO MY NECK AND I GOT REAL NERVOUS THEN SUDDENLY I FOUND THE NEAREST TREE AND STARTED TO CLIMB THAT TREE AND CLIMB AND CLIMB AND SUDDENLY I WAS AT THE TOP OF THE TREE WITH NO MORE CLOTHES WET AND NERVOUS BECAUSE I'D HAVE NO IDEA HOW I WAS GONNA GET OUT OF THIS RAINFOREST BFORE IT FLOOD AND I WILL DIED AND NOBODY WOULD FIND ME AND I WILL NO LONGER BE REMEBER BY ANYBODY.