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My party

By Brandon V.
New York, Age 12

On saturday 6/11/11 brandon had a party at his house but then his mom and dad changed the address to his uncle and aunts house so his dad went to go get his friends and they were squished in the car finally they got to the party and jerry fell out of the car then they ate and drank soda and they played soccer in the yard then they started leaving and the party ended.